http://www.birminghamrecycled.co.uk/recycling/birmingham-recycling-is-it-on-the-increase Environmental News From the Midlands Thu, 05 Jan 2012 10:23:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.birminghamrecycled.co.uk/recycling/birmingham-recycling-is-it-on-the-increase/comment-page-1#comment-28 Paul Bradshaw Tue, 24 Feb 2009 10:33:30 +0000 http://www.birminghamrecycled.co.uk/?p=59#comment-28 Intro needs reworking - not clear enough. You need to say who RWM are - and indent the quotes. And you need to link phrases in the article rather than at the end. Generally this is a bit essay-like - read more news to get a feel for the right style and don't feel you have to quote in depth - you can link. Actually the real story may be in your final par: ask why your house hasn't had this yet? Chase it up, ask questions and you could have something much more interesting. Intro needs reworking – not clear enough. You need to say who RWM are – and indent the quotes. And you need to link phrases in the article rather than at the end.
Generally this is a bit essay-like – read more news to get a feel for the right style and don’t feel you have to quote in depth – you can link.
Actually the real story may be in your final par: ask why your house hasn’t had this yet? Chase it up, ask questions and you could have something much more interesting.

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